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晚輩小仙
The Junior Immortals' Ruse
八戒聞言,心中忐忑,默對行者道:「這是我們的不是:吃了東西,且不走路,只等這般禱祝。卻怎麼答應?」行者又捻一把,忽地開口,叫聲:「晚輩小仙,且休拜祝。我等自蟠桃會上來的,不曾帶得金丹聖水,待改日再來垂賜。」那些大小道士聽見說出話來,一個個抖衣而戰道:「爺爺呀!活天尊臨凡,是必莫放,好歹求個長生的法兒。」八戒闻言,心中忐忑,默对行者道:「这是我们的不是:吃了东西,且不走路,只等这般祷祝。却怎么答应?」行者又捻一把,忽地开口,叫声:「晚辈小仙,且休拜祝。我等自蟠桃会上来的,不曾带得金丹圣水,待改日再来垂赐。」那些大小道士听见说出话来,一个个抖衣而战道:「爷爷呀!活天尊临凡,是必莫放,好歹求个长生的法儿。」
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八戒聞言,心中忐忑,默對行者道:「這是我們的不是:吃了東西,且不走路,只等這般禱祝。
八戒闻言,心中忐忑,默对行者道:「这是我们的不是:吃了东西,且不走路,只等这般祷祝。
Bajie, hearing this, grew flustered at heart and whispered aside to Pilgrim, “This is our own doing: we ate the things and, instead of hitting the road, sat waiting for just such a prayer as this.
心中: 中 = zhōng. 行者: 行 = xíng. 我們的不是 “our fault, our wrong” (nominal 不是). 禱祝 “to pray, invoke.”
卻怎麼答應?」
却怎么答应?」
How are we to answer them?”
答應: 應 = yìng, “to answer, respond”; pypinyin mis-defaults yīng.
行者又捻一把,忽地開口,叫聲:「晚輩小仙,且休拜祝。
行者又捻一把,忽地开口,叫声:「晚辈小仙,且休拜祝。
Pilgrim gave him another pinch, then suddenly opened his mouth and called out, “You juniors of the immortal ranks, cease your prostrations for a moment.
行者 行 = xíng. 捻一把: 一 = yì before 把 (3rd tone). 晚輩小仙 “you junior immortals” — Wukong impersonating a Heavenly Venerable addressing lesser gods.
我等自蟠桃會上來的,不曾帶得金丹聖水,待改日再來垂賜。」
我等自蟠桃会上来的,不曾带得金丹圣水,待改日再来垂赐。」
We have come straight from the Feast of the Peaches and did not bring golden elixir or holy water along; wait another day and we shall come again to bestow it.”
蟠桃會 the Feast of Immortal Peaches (in the Jade Emperor's heaven). 不曾帶得: 得 = dé (“to have brought, obtained”); 不 = bù before 曾 (2nd tone).
那些大小道士聽見說出話來,一個個抖衣而戰道:「爺爺呀!
那些大小道士听见说出话来,一个个抖衣而战道:「爷爷呀!
The Daoists, great and small, hearing a voice speak out, each shook in his robes and cried out, trembling, “Venerable Fathers!
Deictic 那些: 那 = nà. 一個個: 一 = yí before 個 (4th tone). 抖衣而戰 “to quake in one's clothes” — to tremble with awe.
活天尊臨凡,是必莫放,好歹求個長生的法兒。」
活天尊临凡,是必莫放,好歹求个长生的法儿。」
A living Venerable has come down among mortals — we must by no means let him go; come what may, let us beg some means of everlasting life!”
臨凡 “to descend to the mortal world.” 好歹 “come what may, by hook or crook.” 長生: 長 = cháng. 法兒: suffixal 兒 = er, “a method, a means.”
總評 Commentary
The scene's comedy sharpens: Bajie panics at the exposure, but Wukong — with a warning pinch — seizes the role of a descended god and improvises a plausible divine excuse (“we left the elixir at home”). The Daoists' terror is entirely sincere, which is what makes it funny; their piety has left them defenceless against exactly this kind of imposture.