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含詞賦 With rhapsody
妖魔弄風
The Demon Conjures a Whirlwind
那物在空中明明看著,忍不住心頭火起道:「這猴和尚十分憊懶,就作我是個妖魔,要害你師父,卻還不曾見怎麼下手哩,你怎麼就把我這等傷損?早是我有算計,出神走了;不然,是無故傷生也。若不趁此時拿了唐僧,再讓一番,越教他停留長智。」好怪物,就在半空裡弄了一陣旋風,呼的一聲響喨,走石揚沙,誠然兇狠。好風:那物在空中明明看着,忍不住心头火起道:「这猴和尚十分惫懒,就作我是个妖魔,要害你师父,却还不曾见怎么下手哩,你怎么就把我这等伤损?早是我有算计,出神走了;不然,是无故伤生也。若不趁此时拿了唐僧,再让一番,越教他停留长智。」好怪物,就在半空里弄了一阵旋风,呼的一声响喨,走石扬沙,诚然凶狠。好风:
淘淘怒捲水雲腥,黑氣騰騰閉日明。淘淘怒卷水云腥,黑气腾腾闭日明。
嶺樹連根通拔盡,野梅帶幹悉皆平。岭树连根通拔尽,野梅带干悉皆平。
黃沙迷目人難走,怪石傷殘路怎平。黄沙迷目人难走,怪石伤残路怎平。
滾滾團團平地暗,遍山禽獸發哮聲。滚滚团团平地暗,遍山禽兽发哮声。
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那物在空中明明看著,忍不住心頭火起道:「這猴和尚十分憊懶,就作我是個妖魔,要害你師父,卻還不曾見怎麼下手哩,你怎麼就把我這等傷損?
那物在空中明明看着,忍不住心头火起道:「这猴和尚十分惫懒,就作我是个妖魔,要害你师父,却还不曾见怎么下手哩,你怎么就把我这等伤损?
That thing, plain to see in the middle air, could not hold back the fire that rose in his heart, and said: "This monkey-monk is an utter rogue! Granted I'm a demon meaning to harm your master — you'd not yet even seen how I'd set to work, so how could you damage me like this?
那物: deictic 那 = nà. 空中: 中 = zhōng. 明明看著: durative 著 = zhe. 忍不住: mechanical sandhi raises 不 to bú before 住 (4th tone). 十分: 分 = fēn. 卻還不曾: 還 = hái ("yet"); mechanical sandhi leaves 不 as bù before 曾 (2nd tone).
早是我有算計,出神走了;
早是我有算计,出神走了;
Lucky I had a plan and got out by sending forth my spirit; otherwise it would have been killing without cause.
出神走了: aspect 了 = le. 算計 = "a plan, a stratagem."
不然,是無故傷生也。
不然,是无故伤生也。
otherwise, it would have been killing without cause.
無故傷生 = "to take life without cause" — the demon's self-justifying framing of Wukong's attack on his shed corpse. mechanical sandhi leaves 不 as bù before 然 (2nd tone).
若不趁此時拿了唐僧,再讓一番,越教他停留長智。」好怪物,就在半空裡弄了一陣旋風,呼的一聲響喨,走石揚沙,誠然兇狠。好風:
若不趁此时拿了唐僧,再让一番,越教他停留长智。」好怪物,就在半空里弄了一阵旋风,呼的一声响喨,走石扬沙,诚然凶狠。好风:
If I don't seize the Tang Monk this very moment, but yield one more time over, all the more will I let him linger and grow wise." Fine monster! Up in the middle air he stirred up a whirlwind — a single roaring blast — that rolled stones and flung sand, truly savage and fierce. A fine wind it was:
若不趁此時: mechanical sandhi raises 不 to bú before 趁 (4th tone). 拿了唐僧: aspect 了 = le. 再讓一番: 一 sandhi → yì before 番 (1st tone). 越教他停留長智: causative 教 = jiào; 長 = zhǎng ("grow," let Wukong grow wiser). 弄了一陣旋風: 一 sandhi → yí before 陣 (4th tone). 一聲響喨: 一 sandhi → yì before 聲 (1st tone). 好風 tag introduces the descriptive 賦.
淘淘怒捲水雲腥,黑氣騰騰閉日明。
淘淘怒卷水云腥,黑气腾腾闭日明。
In seething fury it rolls up the reek of water and cloud; black vapors, thick and rising, shut out the light of day.
淘淘怒捲 / 黑氣騰騰: the opening couplet of the wind-rhapsody, pairing surging water-reek with light-blotting black vapor.
嶺樹連根通拔盡,野梅帶幹悉皆平。
岭树连根通拔尽,野梅带干悉皆平。
Ridge-trees, root and all, are wrenched clean up; wild plums, trunk and all, are laid flat to a man.
連根通拔盡: 盡 = jìn (GLOBAL, "utterly"). 帶幹悉皆平: 幹 = gàn ("trunk").
黃沙迷目人難走,怪石傷殘路怎平。
黄沙迷目人难走,怪石伤残路怎平。
Yellow sand blinds the eye, and a man can hardly walk; jagged rocks maim and wound — how can the road be crossed?
黃沙迷目人難走: 難 = nán ("hard to"). The couplet renders the wind's disorienting violence.
滾滾團團平地暗,遍山禽獸發哮聲。
滚滚团团平地暗,遍山禽兽发哮声。
Rolling and roiling, the level ground goes dark; over all the mountain, birds and beasts send up a howling.
滾滾團團 / 遍山禽獸發哮聲: the closing couplet — total darkness below, the whole bestiary crying out in the storm.
總評 Commentary
The passage turns on the demon's fury at having his shed corpse so thoroughly destroyed, and on the reasoning that fury produces. His complaint has a certain rough justice to it — he had not yet even made his move, he protests, when Wukong smashed and dismembered his body — and his conclusion is coldly strategic: no more delay, no more yielding, for delay only lets the sharp-eyed guardian (停留長智, "linger and grow wise") become harder to overcome. Force having failed to reach him and cunning having been penetrated, he falls back on overwhelming power: a whirlwind.
The wind-rhapsody (好風 賦) that follows is a set-piece of a familiar kind — four parallel couplets of escalating violence, uprooting trees, flattening plums, blinding the eye with sand, darkening the ground, driving the whole mountain's creatures to howl — and its function is to raise the demon's assault to the scale of a natural catastrophe. Where the mountain-fu of Batch 1 established the place as merely ominous, this wind-fu makes the demon's power elemental and irresistible, a storm no vigilance can guard against. It is the hinge of the chapter: the moment the contest passes out of the register of trickery and counter-trickery, in which Wukong held his own, and into the register of sheer force, in which the demon holds the advantage. Under its cover — as the prose tail of the block will tell — the Tang Monk is seized and borne away.