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騎龍收兵
Riding the Dragon, Reclaiming the Arms
卻說那高峰上,李天王眾位忽見火光晃亮,一擁前來。見行者騎著龍,喝喝呼呼,縱著小猴,徑上峰頭,厲聲高叫道:「來收兵器,來收兵器。」火德與哪吒答應一聲。這行者將身一抖,那把毫毛復上身來。哪吒太子收了他六件兵器,火德星君著眾火部收了火龍等物,都笑吟吟贊賀行者不題。却说那高峰上,李天王众位忽见火光晃亮,一拥前来。见行者骑着龙,喝喝呼呼,纵着小猴,径上峰头,厉声高叫道:「来收兵器,来收兵器。」火德与哪咤答应一声。这行者将身一抖,那把毫毛复上身来。哪咤太子收了他六件兵器,火德星君着众火部收了火龙等物,都笑吟吟赞贺行者不题。
逐句解 Line by line
卻說那高峰上,李天王眾位忽見火光晃亮,一擁前來。
却说那高峰上,李天王众位忽见火光晃亮,一拥前来。
Now on the high peak, Devarāja Li and the rest suddenly saw the firelight flashing bright, and came crowding forward in a body.
卻說 marks the shift of scene back to the ridge. Deictic 那高峰: 那 = nà. 一擁前來: 一 sandhis to yì before 擁 (first tone).
見行者騎著龍,喝喝呼呼,縱著小猴,徑上峰頭,厲聲高叫道:「來收兵器,來收兵器。」
见行者骑着龙,喝喝呼呼,纵着小猴,径上峰头,厉声高叫道:「来收兵器,来收兵器。」
They saw Pilgrim riding a dragon, shouting and hallooing, driving his little monkeys on, coming straight up to the head of the peak and calling out at the top of his voice: "Come and take your weapons! Come and take your weapons!"
Both 著 (騎著, 縱著) = zhe, durative, positional. Both 喝 = hè ("to shout"), positional; 喝喝呼呼 is a mimetic doubling of the war-whoop, and pypinyin bakes the drinking hē for it.
火德與哪吒答應一聲。
火德与哪咤答应一声。
The Fire Virtue and Nezha answered with a shout.
答應: 應 = yìng ("to respond"), not the modal yīng. 一聲: 一 = yì before a first tone.
這行者將身一抖,那把毫毛復上身來。
这行者将身一抖,那把毫毛复上身来。
Pilgrim gave his body a shake, and that handful of hairs came back onto him.
將身一抖: 將 = jiāng, disposal. Deictic 那把毫毛: 那 = nà. The fifty porters are dismissed by the same gesture that made them.
哪吒太子收了他六件兵器,火德星君著眾火部收了火龍等物,都笑吟吟贊賀行者不題。
哪咤太子收了他六件兵器,火德星君着众火部收了火龙等物,都笑吟吟赞贺行者不题。
Prince Nezha collected his six weapons, and the Fire Virtue Star Lord had the several fire departments collect the fire-dragons and the rest; and they all congratulated Pilgrim, smiling broadly — of which no more.
太子: 子 = zǐ; both 了 = le, positional; 都 = dōu. 著眾火部: causative-dispatch 著 = zhuó ("had them —"), the reading locked corpus-wide. 不題 is the storyteller's formula for dropping a thread.
總評 Commentary
A short passage, and almost pure spectacle: the gods on the ridge see the mountain light up, and what comes up out of the blaze is Wukong on the back of a stolen fire-dragon, yelling at them to come and collect their own property. The comedy is in the reversal of rank. These are the Jade Emperor's officers, one of them the commander who lost the weapons in the first place, and they are being summoned to a collection point by a monkey on a dragon.
The passage also quietly closes the ledger opened two passages ago, when the spirits asked when their own treasures would come to hand. They have them back — six weapons, the fire-beasts, the whole armoury — and the narrator marks the settlement with 不題, the formula for dropping a thread. What has not come back is the ring, and the reader is meant to notice that the celebration on the peak is being held over an unsolved problem.