天晚各歸 Nightfall, and Each Withdraws
那魔王與孫大聖戰經三個時辰,不分勝敗,早又見天色將晚。妖魔支著長槍道:「悟空,你住了。天昏地暗,不是個賭鬥之時,且各歇息歇息,明朝再與你比迸。」行者罵道:「潑畜休言!老孫的興頭才來,管甚麼天晚?是必與你定個輸贏。」那怪物喝一聲,虛幌一槍,逃了性命,帥群妖收轉干戈,入洞中將門緊緊閉了。那魔王与孙大圣战经三个时辰,不分胜败,早又见天色将晚。妖魔支着长枪道:「悟空,你住了。天昏地暗,不是个赌斗之时,且各歇息歇息,明朝再与你比迸。」行者骂道:「泼畜休言!老孙的兴头才来,管甚么天晚?是必与你定个输赢。」那怪物喝一声,虚幌一枪,逃了性命,帅群妖收转干戈,入洞中将门紧紧闭了。
逐句解 Line by line
That demon king and the Great Sage Sun fought through three watches of the clock without a division of victory or defeat, and early on they saw the sky beginning to darken.
Deictic 那魔王: 那 = nà. 三個時辰 — three double-hours, six hours by the modern reckoning; the unit stays untranslated as shíchen in the reader's mind. 不分勝敗: 分 = fēn. 天色將晚: 將 = jiāng, "about to."
The fiend held his long spear at rest and said: "Wukong, hold there.
支著: durative 著 = zhe. 長槍: 長 = cháng. 你住了: 了 = le; 住 here is "stop, hold," not "dwell."
"The sky is dim and the earth dark, and this is no hour for a wager of arms. Let each of us rest a while, and in the morning I will have it out with you again."
明朝: 朝 = zhāo ("morning"; 明朝 = "tomorrow morning"), not the cháo of court or dynasty. 賭鬥 = "a contest wagered"; 比迸 is the vernacular "to contend, to have it out."
Pilgrim cursed him: "Hold your tongue, foul beast! Old Monkey's blood is only now up — what do I care whether it is late?
潑畜: 畜 = chù. 興頭: 興 = xìng ("mood, high spirits"), not xīng. 管甚麼: 甚 = shén.
"We shall settle which of us wins and which loses, and that is flat."
是必 = "without fail, come what may." 定個輸贏 — "to fix a win and a loss" — answers the demon's 賭鬥 directly: Pilgrim will not adjourn a wager already laid.
The monster gave a shout, made a feint with his spear, escaped with his life, led his band of imps back with their weapons, went into the cave, and shut the gate fast behind him.
Deictic 那怪物: 那 = nà. 虛幌一槍 = "to feint a spear-thrust," the standard formula for a disengagement. 逃了 / 閉了: both 了 = le, specified positionally. 喝一聲: 喝 = hè again (pypinyin bakes hē here even though it gets 喝道 right). 洞中: 中 = zhōng; 將門: disposal 將 = jiāng. 收轉干戈 = "to gather in shield and axe," i.e. to break off the engagement.
The bout ends by the clock rather than by any decision — three 時辰, six hours, with nothing settled — and the demon proposes the adjournment in the polite formula the genre keeps for evenly matched opponents: night has fallen, this is no hour for a wager of arms, we resume in the morning. It is a courtesy of form, and it is also a confession. He is the one who wants the night.
Pilgrim's refusal is characteristic and, for once, sound tactics disguised as temper. He will not let the fight be adjourned, because an adjournment is exactly what he intends to exploit: the passages that follow have him back at the cave mouth within the hour, changed into a cricket, hunting for the ring on the sleeping demon's arm. The fiend's 虛幌一槍 — a feint, then flight — and the gate shut fast behind him set the stage for a night-raid, and the narrator lets the demon believe he has bought himself a quiet night.