不停當 It Would Not Do
那師父爬上馬,與八戒、沙僧,復東來有二十餘里,方才歇下,道:「悟空,如何了呀?」行者丟下扇子道:「不停當,不停當,被那廝哄了。」三藏聽說,愁促眉尖,悶添心上,止不住兩淚交流,只道:「怎生是好?」那师父爬上马,与八戒、沙僧,复东来有二十余里,方才歇下,道:「悟空,如何了呀?」行者丢下扇子道:「不停当,不停当,被那厮哄了。」三藏听说,愁促眉尖,闷添心上,止不住两泪交流,只道:「怎生是好?」
逐句解 Line by line
That master scrambled onto the horse and came back eastward with Eight Rules and Sha Monk more than twenty li before they halted at last. Then he said, 'Wukong — how did it go?'
如何了呀 'how has it turned out, then' — 呀 is the exclamatory particle here, toneless, not the yā of a creaking door in blk9. Twenty li of retreat is the measure of the fire.
Pilgrim threw down the fan and said, 'It would not do, it would not do. That creature has tricked me.'
停當 is tíngdàng, 'settled, in proper order', so 當 takes dàng and not the positional dāng pypinyin supplies. This is the sense the §4 entry was widened to cover at the Ch.59 rulings — 'fitting, as it should be' — and here it is negated twice in five graphs. 哄 hǒng is to fool or take in.
Hearing this, Tripitaka knitted his brows in grief and heaped care upon his heart. He could not hold back the tears that ran down both cheeks, and could only say, 'What is to be done?'
愁促眉尖 'sorrow drawing the brow-tips together'; 悶添心上 'gloom added onto the heart'. The two four-graph clauses are a matched pair, and the 不 in 止不住 reads bú before the fourth-tone 住.
Twenty li of retreat, and only then do they stop. The distance is the measure of what Pilgrim's three fannings did, and Tripitaka's question when they halt — 如何了呀, how did it go then — is asked of a man who has arrived at a run with his leg hair burnt off.
不停當,不停當 is the answer, doubled in the cadence the chapter has used all through, and it is an admission rather than a report. 停當 means settled, in proper order, as things ought to be; negated twice it says that nothing is. Then the diagnosis: 被那廝哄了, that creature has tricked me.
It is worth registering how quickly he gets there. He has no proof, no second fan to compare, and the one witness he consulted confirmed the object was genuine. He reasons from a result that contradicts everything he was told about the fan, and arrives at the right answer immediately — the same method that got him from a cake in his hand to the existence of the Iron-Fan Immortal.
Tripitaka weeps. The novel gives him two matched four-graph clauses of grief and then 怎生是好, what is to be done, which is his standing contribution at such moments. He has been told the road is shut and the remedy has failed.