搗作爛醬 Beaten to a Paste
八戒上前,一隻腳屣住那怪的胸背道:「孽畜!今番使不得倒馬毒了。」那怪動也不動,被獃子一頓釘鈀,搗作一團爛醬。那星官復聚金光,駕雲而去。行者與八戒、沙僧朝天拱謝道:「有累,有累。改日赴宮拜酬。」八戒上前,一只脚屣住那怪的胸背道:「孽畜!今番使不得倒马毒了。」那怪动也不动,被呆子一顿钉钯,捣作一团烂酱。那星官复聚金光,驾云而去。行者与八戒、沙僧朝天拱谢道:「有累,有累。改日赴宫拜酬。」
逐句解 Line by line
Bajie came forward, set one foot upon the creature's back and breast, and said, “Sinful beast! There will be no using the horse-felling poison this time.”
屣 is to tread upon, and is encoded as printed. 胸背 takes 背 as bèi. 使不得 is the potential negative with the particle de; 倒馬毒 takes 倒 as dǎo, agreeing with both earlier namings of the weapon.
The creature did not so much as stir; and the idiot gave it one round with the rake and pounded it into a lump of rotten paste.
爛 is the invariant làn. 動也不動 takes bú before the fourth tone of 動.
The Star Officer gathered up his golden light again and rode away upon a cloud.
復聚 is to reassemble what had been let out — the radiance he had put off in taking the form of a cock.
Pilgrim, Bajie and Sha Monk raised their clasped hands towards heaven in thanks, saying, “We have put you to trouble, we have put you to trouble. On another day we shall come to your palace and repay the courtesy.”
有累 takes 累 as the invariant lěi, to trouble or burden — pypinyin gives lèi, 'tired', which would be wrong; the reading was ruled at the Ch.54 close. 朝天 takes 朝 as cháo.
The dignity of the poem lasts exactly one segment. Bajie puts a foot on the corpse, calls it a sinful beast, and observes that there will be no horse-felling poison this time — a taunt addressed to something that is already dead and cannot hear it. Then, because the creature does not stir, he gives it a round with the rake and pounds it into 一團爛醬, a lump of rotten paste. Four lines earlier the novel was calling her a star made manifest and speaking of return to the root.
The juxtaposition is not carelessness. This novel habitually sets its lyric register directly against its coarsest one, and the effect here is to place the reader between two accounts of the same body: the poem's, in which a creature that cultivated in vain is restored to what it truly was, and Bajie's, in which there is a dead insect on the ground that can be safely trodden on. Neither is withdrawn in favour of the other.
The passage then closes on protocol. The Star Officer gathers his light and goes; the three brothers raise their clasped hands and thank him twice over, and promise to call at his palace another day and repay the courtesy. It is the same punctilio he showed in apologising for the tea. The scorpion who frightened the Buddha has been disposed of, and the parties exchange civilities about a future visit.